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Author Topic: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan  (Read 20947 times)

Offline Dave Cooper please

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #75 on: May 27, 2016, 04:44:11 PM »
Okay, some constructive criticism.

I think these pieces struggle to know what they want to be, are they meant to be social commentary? Witty monologues? Dry, observation pieces? What?
In the end they end up being nothing but slightly mad ramblings which you tend to completely switch off from after about 30 seconds, possibly due to the poor presentation.
You might get away with it if there were actually some funny lines or a decent hook in the first 30 seconds, but there isn't, if there are some genuinely funny lines in there then I missed them completely.

Offline stuart r

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #76 on: May 27, 2016, 04:57:56 PM »
Okay, some constructive criticism.

I think these pieces struggle to know what they want to be, are they meant to be social commentary? Witty monologues? Dry, observation pieces? What?
In the end they end up being nothing but slightly mad ramblings which you tend to completely switch off from after about 30 seconds, possibly due to the poor presentation.
You might get away with it if there were actually some funny lines or a decent hook in the first 30 seconds, but there isn't, if there are some genuinely funny lines in there then I missed them completely.

He may not be around to take on board your comments. Suffice to say the content of his last post was, and I quote "Suck my cock you f*cking imbecile".
« Last Edit: May 27, 2016, 05:02:39 PM by stuart r »

Offline Dave Cooper please

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #77 on: May 27, 2016, 05:30:44 PM »
Yes, seen it now, I didn't think the meltdown would be that sudden.

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #78 on: May 27, 2016, 05:34:07 PM »
Where did he have his meltdown?

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #79 on: May 27, 2016, 05:44:05 PM »
That hotbed of controversy Music Documentaries

Offline Jimbo

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #80 on: May 27, 2016, 11:32:35 PM »
For me, "suck my cock you fucking imbecile" by the mild-mannered and affable IQLowe will go down alongside "why did Barry take the penalty", "Did you know Prince William was a Villa fan" and "African car reverser" as H&V gold dust. His lovely old iron-faced missus on his last video was the icing on the cake.

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #81 on: May 27, 2016, 11:35:40 PM »
Even though he was a strange 'un, I don't think there's any need to bring his missus into it.

Offline Jimbo

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Re: IQLowe: Adventures of a Villa fan
« Reply #82 on: May 27, 2016, 11:43:14 PM »
Even though he was a strange 'un, I don't think there's any need to bring his missus into it.

He brought his missus into it. It was simply a fitting way to end it all, her looking thoroughly hacked off with all the 'comedy' of it.

 


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