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Author Topic: Press-ed for breath  (Read 1740 times)

Offline simon ward 50

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Re: Press-ed for breath
« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2024, 10:59:06 AM »
Evocative writing Dave

Offline olaftab

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Re: Press-ed for breath
« Reply #16 on: May 14, 2024, 11:04:36 AM »
You are right as I also "fear" too perfect.

Offline Hookeysmith

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Re: Press-ed for breath
« Reply #17 on: May 14, 2024, 05:58:24 PM »
Nailed it - great read

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Re: Press-ed for breath
« Reply #18 on: May 14, 2024, 06:09:37 PM »
Like other posters, I enjoyed the echoes of Peter Morris. A very well-written, emotive piece, Dave.

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Re: Press-ed for breath
« Reply #19 on: May 14, 2024, 06:34:23 PM »
I was texting with my younger daughter during the came. She’s a recent convert, and is overflowing with zest. When the game ended she texted me “I’ve just done my victory dance”. I’ve witnessed her victory dance, and it’s overflowing with energy that only young people can do.

The point of this is she was elated by a draw and, very rarely for me, so I was tool It was a wonderful feeling.

 


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